Essay1 rewrite

I will tell you Toy Story. It is the American animation movie which was released on
November 22th 1995 in United States of America. Four months later it was also
released in Japan. Toy Story was produced by Pixar Animation Studios, and The Walt
Disney Studios distributed this movie Toy Story. Tom Hanks (the real name: Thomas
Jeffrey Hanks) who is famous for the actor of “Saving Private Ryan” played the leading
part. The total proceeds of Toy Story in the whole world were 361958736 dollars, and
the proceeds of it in USA were 191796233 dollars. The director John Alan Lasseter got
Academy Special Achievement Award which is one of Academy Awards. In addition,
scenario award (Andrew Christopher Stanton Jr.), original main theme song award
("You've Got a Friend in Me"), and musical composition award of comedy (Randall
Stuart Newman) were nominated although none of them was awards.

No toy speaks languages and is lifeless although some toys can move with human
strength. However, this movie makes me feel sympathy for the toys. I learned to think
that I should make it a rule to handle everything more preciously. When I become a
father, I will tell my children not to handle their toys roughly. Or, they will become
accursed. If I were a living toy, I could not endure my toy’s life because I would be
broken or injured by bad kids. Then, I would continue to curse them until they are
scared, so you had better handle not only toys but also foods, drink, and many other
tools. Or, you may be punished by heaven. I will remember it, and you must also!! Toys
are same as friends and partners for me and for a child playing alone. Especially, I like
Hot Wheels, TOMICA, and Radio Control Cars. All of them are my precious.

Essay2 rewrite

I will tell you School of Rock. It is the comedy movie which was
released on October 3rd 2003. The director was Richard Linklater.
The scenario writer was Mike White who is famous for the
producer of Freaks and Geeks. The producer was Scott Rudin who
got 80th Academy Award for Best Motion Picture of the Year,
Academy Award for Best Picture.

The main actors are Jack Black and Joan Cusack (real name:
Joan Mary Cusack). Jack played as Dewey Finn. Joan played as
Rosalie "Roz" Mullins. In addition, Mike also played as Ned
Schneebly. Other actors are Sarah Kate Silverman, Rebecca
Brown, and Miranda Taylor Cosgrove.

Dewey loves rock music fanatically. However, he was fired the
band club because he performed too fanatically and selfishly. If I
were Dewey, I would behave not so fanatically, but calmly,
logically, and like an adult member of society. It is true that I also
have something to be fanatical. For example, I like sports cars, so
I tell some car enthusiasts many Japanese sports cars’ details
fanatically sometimes. I also drive a car fanatically on some
expressways. As a result, I have been charged with speeding.
However, I could know how important behaving as an adult
member of society is after I saw this School of Rock.

If you do not want to be fired the club or the corporation, you had
better make it a rule to behave calmly, logically, and like an adult
member of society, and you had better do it a rule to consider
logically and to straighten your clothes. In addition, you had
better be careful for your health. You had better make it a rule
not to drink any liquor and not to smoke. Or, you will be shamed.
I want you to remember all of them.

24 Rewrite Essay Final

I will tell you about the first episode of 24-TWENTY FOUR-. The following thing caused between AM 0:00 to 1:00 on March 2002. The stage is a day (24 hours) of United States presidential primary in California, United States of America. Jack Bauer gets information that David Palmer who is the first black runner of the president will be assassinated in 24 hours. In addition, it is suggested that there is the traitor in CTU.

On the other hand, Kim who is the daughter of Jack Bauer and a senior high school student is kidnapped by the group who is planning to assassinate Palmer. After that, Teri Bauer who is his wife is also kidnapped by the group.

What is worse, the political scandal crystallizes because the son of David Palmer seems to have killed someone. Jack planned to protect the Congressman. However, he is regarded as a criminal who did assassination of a Congressman because the terrorists threatened him “Become the criminal who did assassination of a Congressman, or we will kill your daughter and wife”.

Kiefer William Frederick Dempsey George Rufus Sutherland played Jack Bauer who is the main character of the drama. The drama was broadcast by The Fox Broadcasting Company. The company produced Prison Break and X File which are the same category as the former.
Which do you like the best 24-TWENTY FOUR-, Prison Break, or X File? If I have a chance to watch all of them, I will try doing once. Although it is my opinion, no other foreign drama is as interesting as the one. If there is more interesting foreign drama, it is ER (Emergency Room) which used to be broadcast on National Broadcasting Company in America. Still, I love 24- TWENTY FOUR- better than ER because the drama made me amazed.

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BR2-15 Titanic

Cameron’s film, Titanic, was very expensive – it cost $200 million. Every minute of the film cost $1 million. (page 8)

I will tell you Titanic. Titanic was the biggest ship in the world- 24,900 tons. The length was 265 meters long and 28 meters across. The biggest ship amazed many people. Of course, I was also marveled at the super great hugeness of the ship. However, the ship crashed into the iceberg. As a result, about 1500 people died. The next day evening news which was the most famous newspaper said “Titanic disaster great loss of life.” I recognized that controlling the ship is pretty dangerous work for me. If I make a little mistake, many people will be killed by me.

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 Vicary, Tim. (1999). Titanic. Oxford: Oxford University Press.